Autumm+Story+Draft+J.L

The Toy Factory

Boo "aw didn't scare you" "oh...hey Michael" Halloween was coming up in Midnight Falls and Michelle was not a "Halloween" person. It was 3 o'clock and they were waiting for they're friends at BayNard street. Michelle was a 14 year old average boring life girl. Her eyes were light purple, she had blond hair, and was very emotionless. The person who said the so called scary boo, Micheal....the most immature inexpieirenced 13 year old weirdo with no manners. He had brown shaggy hair and a weird smell when you walk near him. "what are you going to be for Halloween?" "me? im 14, too old" "I'm 13 and that's just 1 year apart" "yeah, i know but i'm not weird" "fine, don't have Halloween spirit.I'm going to be a nerd" as Michael said looking ahead. "i think i see Jenna" "me too" Michelle said as looking squinting. "Hey guys!" Jenna yelled from a distance. "Hi! i wonder why she runs so slow" Jenna was the same age as Michael. Her hair was silky and the color onyx(pure onyx) Her clothes were very..uh..punk if you say. Even though she looks tough and strong, she isn't. She is a worry-wort about everything. "where's Dylan? Is he still at home!" "whoa calm down" they both said "i just called him and he said he was here!" "over here guys!" Dylan was the oldest of them all,15 even though he was the oldest,he was still immature like Michael. His B.O was better than Michael's(that's for sure) he was very weirdl to people. He had blue eyes and his skin color was tanned. "DUDE,TOMORROW IS HALLOWEEN!" " I KNOW MAN!" "what's wrong with them" Jenna asked "i don't really know" Jenna and Michelle looked at each other and said together, guy stuff as all of them walked away. The next day all of them got a ride from their parents. "bye mom" Dylan said as he got out of the car "see ya mom" Michelle said emotionless. "hey all. Ready for a nice Halloween" "yea, what ever" " I AM!" "ok, but let's be carful out here" Jenna said with a scared voice. The next 2 hours they already covered 107 houses. "(huff) (puff) can..we..stop..for a bit,phew" Michelle said as bending down "fine" Michael said in a grumpy voice. They saw other kids from they're school and the other kids said we dare you to go in to that abanded toy factory down the street. "I say we do it. I'm bored of this candy and knock knock trick-or-treat thing" The minute Michelle stoped talking Jenna said NO! right away. "why not? im really tired and bored" "FINE! bt only for a little" The 4 of them walked down the street and looked at the big gate. Dylan was the first to walk forward then all of them followed. On the gate there was a sign that said haunted RUN AWAY and the rest was faded out. They climed over the fence but Dylan fell so he tried again. They all opened the big gate and they say tons of creepy toys and machinery. "whoa.." they all said beside Jenna who stood frozen. "ok let's go now" "wait, we just got here" Michelle said softly. Suddenly the Gate slammed shut. They all slammed and kicked the door but they just made sounds. A puppet of a little girl started to float in the air. "Bwhehehe" the puppet spoked. "HELP!" Jenna screamed. "you 4 should of never came here. The sign said haunted RUN AWAY. I guess you couldn't read. BWHAHAHA!. I won't let you 4 leave until you pass my toys..." "WHAT'S GOING ON!" Michael yelled. "now toy's...ATTACK" As she finished talking all the toys came to life and charged at the 4. There were doll's,teddy bears,action figures,barbie dolls,and other toys. "WHAT DO WE DO NOW!"Jenna screamed as loud as she could because the toys were so loud. "I DON'T KNOW!!" Michael screamed as well. "I say we just we kick them until there's no more toys. These are just things that we played with 4 or 5 years ago"Dylan said bravely "uhh..yeah..sure, 4 or 5" Micheal said (because he still plays with them). "i'm fine with that" Michelle said happily for some reason. Then the 4 of them fought the toys for about 30 minutes already. "these things don't seem to give up and i don't see an end to them" " i know!. I think the puppet is controling them. I say we go and try to kill the doll" "already on it" Jenna said. She dashed through the toys and kicked them. As she ran barbie dolls flew around the air. She got close to the doll and jumped as high as she could and grabbed the puppet's legs. "WHAT ARE YOU DOING!?" "trying to get us out of here!" She pulled as hard as she could and ripped the puppet to pieces. When she ripped a part a scream came from no where. When she was done, all the toys dissapeared. "whoa... Jenna..that was very bold of you" " i know. I just wanted to get out of here" All of them tried to open the door but it still wouldn't budge. "uhh.. i found a button that said open over here" Michael said as walking to the wall by the gate "WHAT!" they all said. Michael pushed it and they all ran out.